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You have amazing sound! I really enjoyed this track. I have been meaning to look for more music like this, done right, exactly as you have done, and also from artists like you! :D

I love how everything is incredibly complex, yet so simple!

I felt so sad listening to this. It felt like a good bye. The vocals were hard to make out, but sounded eerie and dominant. It made you want to believe that if you submitted to the voice in the track, it would bring about the trip you were asking for! But also made you feel hesitant as his demeanor was something else!

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Not a single note was off key, not a single beat was missed. It was very hypnotic and on par with the ambient genre. Very sad, and I just now looked at the tags.

neBSounds responds:

Thanks! glad you liked it

This spooky track is at it to show off the freak of nature of the spring time as well! Especially in kansas with it's tornadoes. Then it takes me on a cosmic ride. I feel sucked into a nothingness. A forever empty dimension of space and time combined together. And the sound of bass in the background as if that's from a distance. I sort of tripped with teamspeak open, and some buzzing noises in the background sounding like voices. Spoopy. Then the sound of a voice that is literally the sound of strong middle eastern influences, the darker side of course.

I hear all the softer and louder parts, but only on my ATH-M50S. It does sound muddy, I'll give one reviewer that. But I think with the way you wanted your piano to sound, you made it ambient and it just sounds like you took a cutoff frequency control and turned it a little ways down.

I can say all the notes are in the right place, some rhythm issues with the melody is off. But I'm sure another listen will fix that. At the time. I think there is some messy notes at 4:26-4:40 or it may be the key is off tune. I'm real quick about picking up on a piano that has a TINY ITTY BITTY WITSY BIT of tuning issues.

Wow, 8:55. This is just too much like a classical movement. I love it. I just wish you could put more emotion into your notations [notes]. But then I get bursts of climax which makes it sound really nice.

There are some parts I'd love to see softer too. Then it can become a really AWESOME classical movement. Here we go, climax. Tons of them! Great!

My favourite part is probably the ending parts, about 1-2 mins from the end. It's well put together. Or it's just my taste. :P

pftq responds:

Thanks. Glad you enjoyed this. I guess I gave up on this piece too quickly. Will try not to let that be a habit.

I could see your joy in your production, simply because you kept playing with the sounds you like to hear, and it sounded like a kid playing on the electronic piano with all the noises you get if you press on all the keys on the electronic piano.

Soon I'm off to space with this track, and then it stops. I wish there was more, and the dead silence leaves me breathless with how my trip ended.

Thanks for sharing.

optimize responds:

That comment was really touchy thankyou

I don't care right now if this was entirely super repetitive or not. I just enjoyed it. I love the bass, the percussion, and the melodies. I love it all!

I'd however suggest some switch ups of some of your "chorus" verses of the track. I can imagine using some music theory techniques to change up the notes to the melody. If you really want to get good at switching things up. You could use a note that is cohesive with the note it originally was. Such as A would match up with C and E. Or mix minors and majors.

However, after all is done, and listened to, I find this track to be really neat! I just can't get over that melody with the harpsichord sound. I really dig it!

AngstClinic responds:

Thank you, good sir! I was going to do more with the melody, but I went with a more minimalistic approach, I wanted to make the listener feel like chilling, and part of chilling for me is stability. I like to be aware and I like to know my surroundings, and this song is more of an OCD chill for me :D I agree though, I do like working with switching up the melody, so I will be putting more of it in my works! Thank you for the comment and advice!

Every time I listen to it, I feel like I'm at a bar, or doing work, and I'm just feeling the flow of the music so much that I literally feel almost left in the wake of realization I'm not even listening to the track anymore.

This is what music should be like.

Libby-Shimmz responds:

Coffeehouse Jazz is the best kind. :)

Thanks for the review Kelpie!

Interesting story. Very well put together. It almost seems like a movie instead of a track!

The hihats can be changed using the EQ plugin in Audacity! Otherwise a decent track.

cheezz responds:

I might give it a shot, thanks for the advice.

It's adorable. I can't wait for your full version. Just make sure to add in more melodies. Dynamic melodies that make up the "lyrics" or "storyline" of the track. I'd like to hear more, but only if you could transition without problems with a newer version of your melody.

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