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I love that you mention that it's a work in progress, because now I know you know what's wrong with it. I certainly would love to hear more out of the piano melody, and make it less harsh of a transitioned sound. I just love to add ambient to my stuff. 4.5 stars for having something nice to listen to.

Bradley-Pittman responds:

I just made this today, so I'm sure going back to it with some fresh ears after a day or two away from it will do a lot of good. Thanks for the kind words and critique : )

I'm beginning to see a break down with funky low sub bass. I want to hear more, even though the looped track is wonderful and pleasing to the ears. I feel so happy, and rare as it is to have happy music, I feel DRIVEN. I feel inspired. Passionate and compassionate. It's a wonderful day. A new outlook on life, I've come forth to blaze. From the haze to the medicinal phase, I chase my wildest dreams. It seems I MUST carry on, for I love this song.

Bradley-Pittman responds:

Wow thanks so much. I haven't messed with this track in a while, but you've got me excited about it again. I made this a while back, and couldn't for the life of me figure out where to go with it. Though I would periodically open it up and groove to it for a couple minutes. It's like, every time I tried to extend it and rearrange the parts or add new ones, it just didn't have the same *feel*

Anyways, I'll work on it ; )

This loop could be played for hours on end! I love it's awesome simplicity. Old or not, I want to hear it extended. It would be sooooo cooooooool! GET INTO THE MODE! I WANNA HEAR MORE!

Thanks for sharing <3,
Kelpalots

Digiguy responds:

I'm glad you enjoy it! I'm not sure if I even have the original files for this track now. I'll look into this style more in the future for you.

It starts off a little dry, like a good book with a dry chapter or two. Then you really get into gear, and play what I like - instrumentals with other mixings of genres. I love that e-pianoish sound, it almost sounds like a recording.

You've really got the evolving melodies down. It is awesome.

Thanks for sharing.

Dubwolfer responds:

Thank you!

I was just messing around earlier and actually began this song from more around the middle area so I had to work backwards and because of that I made my intro kinda shitty lol. That's no excuse though x3

Thanks for listening, feedback means a lot!

I don't care right now if this was entirely super repetitive or not. I just enjoyed it. I love the bass, the percussion, and the melodies. I love it all!

I'd however suggest some switch ups of some of your "chorus" verses of the track. I can imagine using some music theory techniques to change up the notes to the melody. If you really want to get good at switching things up. You could use a note that is cohesive with the note it originally was. Such as A would match up with C and E. Or mix minors and majors.

However, after all is done, and listened to, I find this track to be really neat! I just can't get over that melody with the harpsichord sound. I really dig it!

AngstClinic responds:

Thank you, good sir! I was going to do more with the melody, but I went with a more minimalistic approach, I wanted to make the listener feel like chilling, and part of chilling for me is stability. I like to be aware and I like to know my surroundings, and this song is more of an OCD chill for me :D I agree though, I do like working with switching up the melody, so I will be putting more of it in my works! Thank you for the comment and advice!

Every time I listen to it, I feel like I'm at a bar, or doing work, and I'm just feeling the flow of the music so much that I literally feel almost left in the wake of realization I'm not even listening to the track anymore.

This is what music should be like.

Libby-Shimmz responds:

Coffeehouse Jazz is the best kind. :)

Thanks for the review Kelpie!

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